I think the landlord looks great. How do you want to make the man more cartoony? He has a lot of personality because of the details in his form, whereas Janice seems a lot more generic because of her simple lines. I would like to see the first version of this story that you did to know where you are starting from and to know more about the plot. Erica
Derp
ReplyDeleteCan I just say
ReplyDelete"oh my god.
its wonderful. :)"
On every drawing you do and still have it be funny?
Maybe...what if the lines around his skin are browner/lighter in color. or it's just because his nose is so epic.
ReplyDeletealso, her thighs are so hot.
ReplyDeleteI think the landlord looks great. How do you want to make the man more cartoony? He has a lot of personality because of the details in his form, whereas Janice seems a lot more generic because of her simple lines. I would like to see the first version of this story that you did to know where you are starting from and to know more about the plot.
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