Don't know about these colors yet.
Note on page 14, panel 5- if that guy doesn't look like a philanderer, I don't know who does. He's got the loosened necktie and everything. Don't you like the sexy touching in panel 3? lolololol
ugh i just looked at page 15 again, it needs fixing in lots of ways. Panel 2 face is generally dumb, panel 3- blue lynn would have to be sitting on the floor for that angle. huhhhgh. Panel 1 passes.
The next page is all making out and sexy stuff. Kill me.
Look, I got my Right Beyond-specific business cards AND Justin Bieber came over to model them for me:
...A motorcycle helmet modeled after a watermelon?
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That is a hot guy carolyn. Good job.
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YOUR HAIR.
I LOVE IT.
These pages are looking great! I love the huge glowing buffalo in the (factory?) It's really unexpected. I'm also enjoying the way you are playing with the names of Amy May, Yam in different frames. I am wondering if giving her blue skin here is to differentiate her from the orange girl under the desk or if she is supposed to look dead/zombie-like? The lettering is looking good too. Your handwriting?
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