Can I just say "oh my god. its wonderful. :)"On every drawing you do and still have it be funny?
Maybe...what if the lines around his skin are browner/lighter in color. or it's just because his nose is so epic.
also, her thighs are so hot.
I think the landlord looks great. How do you want to make the man more cartoony? He has a lot of personality because of the details in his form, whereas Janice seems a lot more generic because of her simple lines. I would like to see the first version of this story that you did to know where you are starting from and to know more about the plot. Erica