Thursday, February 10, 2011

Page2 inks kind of

I am really proud of the first panel. Obviously this isn't done, I need to add the characters to the rest of the panels. anyways I 'm really happy with this so far.


  1. Carolyn,
    What's going on in this panel?? I would appreciate the repetition if I could figure out what I'm looking at and the significance of the shift in viewpoints. What you've posted so far is looking really great. But this is an enigma.


  2. Like I said, there aren't any people in the panels yet.

  3. Carolyn,
    The first page looks good! The color is evocative. The only thing that looks out of place is the tree foliage, which looks flat. Some more tone in there would help. With the other panel I don't know what I"m looking at. I think it's looking down on a room in a train but not sure and don't understand the repetition. I guess this will become clear. I would like to read the story, so please send it to me. thanks!